Which revision improves the flow of the paragraph?
Read the body paragraph from an essay.
"Lords who owned land in Japan certainly had armies.
These professional soldiers fought when they were
called on. There were also farmers whom lords could
call on for help when needed."
"Lords who owned land in Japan certainly had
armies. These professional soldiers fought when they
were called on. However, lords also had farmers
whom they could call on for help when needed."
O "However, lords who owned land in Japan certainly
had armies. These professional soldiers fought when
they were called on. Lords also had farmers whom
they could call on for help when needed."
O "Lords who owned land in Japan certainly had
armies. However, these professional soldiers fought
when they were called on. Lords also had farmers
whom they could call on for help when needed."
"Lords who owned land in Japan certainly had
armies. These professional soldiers, however, fought
when they were called on. Lords also had farmers
whom they could call on for help when needed."
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Answer:
the first one
Explanation:
B and C just don't feel right, and d doesn't make sense where the however was placed, so the answer is A (the top or first one)
Answer:
the first one (A)
Explanation:
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2. "I thought myself pretty smart at many things, like holding my breath, running, jumping, or
climbing vines in Old Woman Swamp, and I wanted more than anything else someone to race
to Horsehead Landing, someone to box with, and someone to perch in the top fork of the great
pine behind the barn where across the fields and swamps you could see the sea."
This passage from "The Scarlet Ibis" shows that the point of view is
third-person omniscient
second person
third person
first person
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Answer:
first person
Explanation:
narrator uses first person words such as I.
First person
Explanation:
She uses the word "I" meaning that the passage is from her point of view (first person)
Which sentence best explains the main difference in the way the two passages use a literary device?
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Answer:
C. The memoir uses figurative language to emphasize Hibson's
feelings about soccer, while the biography focuses on the facts of
her childhood
Explanation:
Who were the movers and shakers of the Classicism time
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Answer:
The answer is below
Explanation:
The Classicism period in literature was around the middle of 1700s to early 1800s. However, some scholars do claim, that the middle of the 1600s which is generally termed as the Enlightenment period to be the beginning of the classicism period.
Some of the movers and shakers of this period; the ones that have so much influence during this time are:
John Locke, John Dryden, etc. (the 1650s to 1700s)
Alexander Pope, Joseph Addison, etc.
(the 1700s to 1750)
Samuel Johnson (the 1750s to 1800s)
The day began like any other school day, except she really wanted to run to the bus and get
to school. She had a feeling that she was going to be named homecoming queen. What is the
author's purpose
a. Entertain
B. persuade
C. inform
d. Scare his audience
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Answer:C
Explanation:
The author includes many details about what she is thinking and is being specific about her emotions
Read this sentence from the text:
The ground had a light dusting of white sand over an under layer of dried black mud. It looked like a recently frosted chocolate cake, though the frosting was spread a bit thin for my taste.
Which of the following best explains the phrase like a recently frosted chocolate cake?
A.
The dark mud showed through the light white sand.
B.
The dark mud was spongy like a warm, fresh cake.
C.
The dark mud had a sweet quality like frosting.
D.
The dark mud held their footsteps like frosting would.
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Answer:
A
Explanation:
can't be b, it didn't say it was spongy nor warm
couldn't be c because it didn't say it was sweet like frosting
can't be D because, well because it said nothing of mud or foosteps.
Im not sure if right tho
Answer:it’s A fore sure I did test got 100
Explanation:
Use the words you're, their and its with no apostrophe in a sentence
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Answer Sentence with the words you're, their, and it's:
My mom woke me up in a hurry and said to me "You're going to be very late for school today if you don't get dressed right now" and so I got dressed as fast as sonic speed and when I ran downstairs I said to my mom, "It's freezing in here!" she responded with "Well wear a puffy jacket then. Anyways breakfast is served now go wake up your siblings or their going to be late like you."
Hope this is correct! Also I hope this helped you and I hope you enjoy the rest of your day.
(So sorry if this is incorrect.)
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The table shows a point-based grading system. A 3 column table with 12 rows. Column 1 is labeled Letter grade with entries A plus, A, A minus, B plus, B, B minus, C plus, C, C minus, D plus, D, E/F. Column 2 is labeled Percent grade with entries 97 to 100, 93 to 96, 90 to 92, 87 to 89, 83 to 86, 80 to 82, 77 to 79, 73 to 76, 70 to 72, 67 to 69, 65 to 66, below 65. Column 3 is labeled 4.0 Scale with entries 4, 4, 3.7, 3.3, 3, 2.7, 2.3, 2, 1.7, 1.3, 1, 0. Jennifer wants to figure out her grade point average for this semester. She received a B in English, a C- in math, and an A in social studies. Based on the table, what is Jennifer’s GPA?
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KATE How many times have I told you not to leave your things around the house? EUGENE A hundred and nine. KATE What? EUGENE You said yesterday, "I told you a hundred and nine times not to leave your things around the house." BLANCHE Don't be fresh to your mother, Gene! EUGENE (To the audience) Was I fresh? I swear . . . That's what she said to me yesterday . . . One day I'm going to put all this in a book or a play. I'm going to be a writer like Ring Lardner or somebody -- that's if things don't work out first with the Yankees, or the Cubs, or the Red Sox, or maybe possibly the Tigers . . . If I get down to the St. Louis Browns, then I'll definitely be a writer. Explain Eugene's perspective on what's happening in this scene. Support your response with details from the text.
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Answer:
In this scene, Eugene is actually answering to her mother, although the answer may be a little sarcastic, it was the truth. He doesn't feel he's being "fresh" and that's why he starts talking to the audience asking if he is fresh because he cannot believe the situation: "Was I fresh? I swear... That's what she said to me yesterday (...)".
Explanation:
To complete this exercise, you have to explain Eugene's perspective in the scene. When he starts talking to the audience, he talks about how he's going to put all those conversations in a book or a play, and the play, which is called "Brighton Beach Memoirs" is a semi-autobiographical play.
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just write one of your favorite inspirational quotes.
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"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift that is why it is called the present." -Master Oogway
This is my favorite quote because it reminds me to stay in the present and in the moment and to only worry about what's happening and not stressing over what already or what is going to happen!
I really hope this is a good quote!
HELP MY LITTLE SISTER IS TAKING A TEST AND THIS MAKES NO SENSE
Which word has a syllable (word part) that is related to Greek mythology?
manic
tunic
titanic
basic
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Answer:
titanic
Explanation:
The word titanic root comes from Greek mythology. The Titans were a generation of powerful divinities. The word titanic may now refer to anything that is extremely big or strong. The Titanic was the name of the famous cruise ship that went down in 1912 after striking an iceberg in the Atlantic Ocean. This name was chosen not only because it was the largest passenger steamship of its time. Also, because it was touted as a strong ship, specifically that it was “unsinkable.”
Answer:
titanic
Explanation:
titanic
♡ Why
are they making the buildinginto passive
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Why are they making the building?
The sentence is in the active voice.
Why is the building being made by them?
The sentence above is in the passive voice.
Hope it helps. :)
ANSWER ASAP 2. Choose the correct way to rewrite sentence 4 by adding a gerund phrase.
a. The government decided that to sell Liberty Bonds was a good solution to raise money.
b. The government decided that selling Liberty Bonds was a good solution to raise money.
C. The government was deciding to sell Liberty Bonds was a good solution to raise money,
d. The government was going out to sell Liberty Bonds was a good solution to raise money.
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Answer:
Im pretty sure it is b please tell me if im wrong
Explanation:
Can anyone explain the plot of Twelfth Night? I’ve read it twice and still don’t understand it.
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Answer:
The Plot is Viola and her twin brother Sebastian have been shipwrecked; each believes the other to be drowned. Viola disguises herself as a young man and, under the name of Cesario, gets a job as a servant for the Duke, Orsino.
Cover pages should include a. The name of your class c. Your teacher’s name b. The date you turn in the paper d. All of these Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D Mar
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Answer:
d
Explanation:
King will consider the movement successful when...
A: The people who have discriminated against african americans are punished
B: The nation apologizes for the injustices african americans have suffered
C: African Americans see some kind of indication that America is willing to change
D: African Americans are no longer subjected to discrimination, segregation,and violence
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Answer:
D: African Americans are no longer subjected to discrimination, segregation,and violence
Explanation:
King will consider the movement successful when African Americans are no longer subjected to discrimination, segregation, and violence. Thus option D is correct.
Who is King?An emperor, to which a king may be subject, is the highest secular ruler in terms of rank, a monarch over a country or region is known as a king.
A turning point in the lengthy battle to end segregation in public and private institutions and to grant civil, social, and legal rights and benefits to African Americans, namely ex-slaves and subsequent descendants. This story included a significant role for the Senate.
Most African American community leaders—often referred to as the brilliant tenth conciliatory approach—took a conciliatory stance as race persecution and separation deepened throughout the United States.
Therefore, option D is the correct option.
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Which sentence ending corrects the sentence frangement below after I play soccer
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I'm assuming the sentence fragment is "After I play soccer". You would follow that with a comma, then "I", then a description of what you did after you played soccer.
Which transition word is also used to indicate a summary?
also
lastly
after
instead
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instead is the answer just took the test
The transition word that is also used to indicate a summary is lastly.
What are transition words?A word or phrase that indicates connection "between paragraphs or sections of a text or speech" is known as a transition word.
The transition word "lastly" is can be used to summarize an idea or provide a summary. Some transition words are used to sum up such as "lastly", "in brief", "finally", etc.
Thus, lastly is also used to indicate a summary.
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Which would be the best title for this passage?
Susan wanted to know where her dog was. "Come here Spot!", she called. After several minutes of searching Susan found Spot's bone at the edge of the fence, right beside the gate. "Oh no!" "Did Spot get out of the yard?" Susan wondered. Searching frantically, she covered every square inch of the yard, but still no Spot. Later that night there was a knock at the front door. "Hello Frank," said Susan's father. "What can I do for you?" Without saying a word, Frank handed over the leash he held in his hand. At the other end of the leash was Spot! "Where did you find Spot?" asked Susan's father. "In my garden chasing away rabbits and doing a really good job of it!" replied Frank.
Spot Chases a Rabbit
Spot is in Trouble
Spot Has an Exciting Day
Spot Chases a Car
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The best title for this passage is :
A) Spot Chases a Rabbit.
TitleThe best title for this passage is the spot chases a Rabbit.
The title of a book, or any other distributed content or work of craftsmanship, may be a title for the work which is more often than not chosen by the creator.
A title can be utilized to distinguish the work, to put it in setting, to communicate a negligible outline of its substance, and to provoke the reader's interest.
Thus, the correct answer is A.
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What does cat woman and wonder woman have in common
Plz help me out quick!!!
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Answer:
they're both female superheroes who appear in dc comics and media
Explanation:
Answer:
The are both female superheroines with the word "woman" in their names.
Explanation:
The also both appear occasionally in Batman comics. They are both also trained and excellent fighters, with Wonder Woman being able to deflect bullets, while Catwoman can dodge them. Also, they have both kissed Batman. They have both met and worked with Harley Quinn. They both have strong moral codes and values that they refuse to break. They are also very strong, prominent characters in the DC Universe and have earned their spots in the hero hall of fame, if there is one. XD
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Think of a time when your dreams felt impossible?
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When I was younger my dream was to become a singer, but as I got older I realized that it was never going to happen because for one I don't have a good singing voice and two...I don't even know how to become a singer. But it's all good because eventually I got over that stage and right now when I grow even more older I now want to become a vet because of the passion I have for animals. ♡
the last time i thought my dream felt impossible because my baby brother got sick and he has a condition
The house looked OK from the outside but inside it was all dark and.....
a. creepy
b. slippery
c. sloppy
d. scruffy
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Answer:
a
Explanation:
creeply
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what is the action verb in “valerie loves creative gardening”
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Answer:
loves
C'mon. This is too easy
Fix the one word that is used incorrectly.
In the human body, the pulmonary vain carries oxygen-rich blood from
the lungs to the heart.
From IXL
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Answer:it is vein
Explanation:
Because vane is misspelled and it is a adjective not in the human body
In the human body, the pulmonary vain carries oxygen-rich blood from the lungs to the heart. In the line the vain is the incorrect word.
What are pulmonary veins?Pulmonary veins are defined as the veins that deliver oxygen-rich blood to the heart from the lungs. The left atrium receives newly oxygenated blood from the lungs via the four pulmonary veins (two from each lung). Blood is expelled from the left ventricle after traveling from the left atrium to all bodily tissues with oxygen and nutrients. The four primary pulmonary veins two from each lung that empty into the left atrium of the heart are the largest pulmonary veins.
In the sentence the vane is written which is an adjective not a part of human body. Veins are the part of human body that are present in different parts of human body.
Thus, in the human body, the pulmonary vain carries oxygen-rich blood from the lungs to the heart. In the line the vain is the incorrect word.
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Read this sentence from a student essay and then answer the question. Manjiro shows great strength. Which choice best revises the sentence so that it contains supporting details from Heart of a Samurai. Manjiro shows great strength, bravery, and creativity as he and the others struggle to survive their many difficulties. Manjiro shows great strength and is frightened of the barbarians, about whom he has heard stories. Manjiro shows great strength and has big dreams of one day becoming a brave and noble samurai. Manjiro shows great strength as he desperately searches for food to take back to the others, who are too weak to leave the cave.
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Answer:
its d
Explanation:
the person above me wants what ever its clled
Answer:
c edge 2023
Explanation:
free n merry chrismass
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Answer:
Thank you so much, that's so sweet :D
Hope you have a merry Christmas!!!!
Explanation: ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
GRINCH MOVIE
i have to draw the grinch represented as a “BAD CITIZEN”
can sm1 please give me ideas of what to draw?
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Answer:
Okay, first of all: which of the Grinch movies? Secondly, easy. Draw him with his sack of stolen goods, and maybe a few dollar bills, to emphasize thievery. Add a ski mask that makes Santa's face or something. Think of what YOU would classify as a 'bad citizen'. Emphasize features within those examples in your Grinch drawing. I am an artist, as well, so I know what components play a part in art. If you still need help or are struggling, just comment. I'll be on for the next 5 minutes.
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Will mark as branliest and heart on profile and answer
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Answer:
prolly C
Explanation:
Answer:
The answer is C.
Explanation:
Dylan received a poor grade and thought of throwing the evidence away, but he knew the teacher would snitch to his parents.
How well have the founding fathers' ideals been realized today? Are Americans living the lives that their ancestors hoped and imagined they would? Which aspects of liberty and justice for all have been fulfilled? Which still need work?
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Answer:
1. Some of them are very recognized while some have been forgotten
2. Definitely not
3. Affirmative action has become a system of racial preferences in my state. Jobs are solicited with explicit acknowledgment that we want a woman or an African-American or a Hispanic for this position.
4. everything
Explanation:
How do supporting details reinforce the central idea in this passage?
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Explanation:
While the main idea is usually in the first sentence, the next most common placement is in the last sentence of a paragraph. The author gives supporting information first and then makes the point in the last sentence.
was unoka the best drummer
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Answer:
Yes.
Explanation:
If he was the only drummer then of course.