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Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places and now people realize wetlands are homes for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are important for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

People used to think wetlands were horrible places. But today, people realize wetlands are homes for birds and an important part of the environment.

People used to think wetlands were horrible places and now people realize wetlands are homes for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

We can see that the best revision is: Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

Revision of a sentence or passage actually refers to the improvement of that sentence that is done in order to create another version of the sentence but yet still the same message.

The best revision here is:

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

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Pick out words from para 2 which mean the same as a lot of things arriving somewhere

How long would it take for a boat to travel from North Korea to Australia (Sydney).

The distance is 8,597 km.

Which detail from the text best helps to develop the central idea that Zora discovers using her intelligence will lead to more opportunities?
Question 4 options:

"First thing, the ladies gave me strange things, like stuffed dates and preserved ginger, and encouraged me to eat all that I wanted."


"They asked me if I loved school, and I lied that I did. There was some truth in it, because I liked geography and reading and I liked to play at recess time."


"My chums pretended not to like anything that I had, but even then I knew that they were jealous. Old Smarty had gotten by them again."


"The story of the choice of Hercules as a boy when he met Pleasure and Duty, and put his hand in that of Duty and followed her steep way to the blue hills of fame and glory,…moved me profoundly. I resolved to be like him."

Quotes for chapter 7 I am mala

How does the author organize paragraphs 2 through 5 of the selection “A Massive Mission”? *

By detailing the order of events that brought Endeavour to its final destination
By listing the steps that had to be taken before Endeavour could fly to California
By describing the features of Endeavour that made it useful for NASA missions
By comparing the differences between Endeavour and a Boeing 747 airplane

what kind of books should i read

write of the romantic period mainly celebrated
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Read the following sentence from Hard Times by Charles Dickens: The piston of the steam-engine worked monotonously up and down, like the head of an elephant in a state of melancholy madness. What mood does the imagery in this sentence create? O A. Entertaining B. Upsetting O C. Friendly O D. Tropical​

write an essay on lumbini in 150 words​

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When running, it is important to breathe through your nose.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence above?
OA. Change it is to you are.
OB. Move When running to the end of the sentence.
OC. Add you are between When and running.
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Who will be benefitted with the tax we pay?

Help me please im confused ;-;

Hawthorne . . . marveled that this mysterious substance called electricity could transmit signals across thousands of miles and make inert machines spring suddenly to life. what is the meaning of the underlined term? useless modern innovative inactive

Select the sentence that clearly links a modifying word, phrase, or clause to the word it modifies.
o full of ideas, ella took her paintbox, brushes, and canvas outside to work.
o she walked up to a bright red tree carrying an art case.
o waiting patiently to begin, the art supplies were checked carefully.
o ella finds that when she works often she is more creative.

Describe the changes that Roosevelt made in the way govemment related to people .

Who came up with dynamics in gender?

(please answer fast) Read the sonnet.

Sonnet XII

by William Shakespeare

When I do count the clock that tells the time,
And see the brave day sunk in hideous night;
When I behold the violet past prime,
And sable curls all silvered o'er with white;
When lofty trees I see barren of leaves
Which erst from heat did canopy the herd,
And summer's green all girded up in sheaves
Borne on the bier with white and bristly beard,
Then of thy beauty do I question make,
That thou among the wastes of time must go,
Since sweets and beauties do themselves forsake
And die as fast as they see others grow;
And nothing 'gainst Time's scythe can make defence
Save breed, to brave him when he takes thee hence.

Which characteristic of "Sonnet XII" shows that the poem is a sonnet?

It has six rhyming couplets.

It has three quatrains and one rhyming couplet.

It has three rhyming couplets and one quatrain.

It has fourteen rhyming couplets.

Read this table of contents.contents 2....................................................preface 5..............................................introduction 15.......................... what is a coral reef? 22...................................extremely fragile 36..........................dangers posed to fish 40.......................environmental concerns 51.....................................in great danger 70....................................measures taken 87................................what can you do? ?based on this table of contents, on which page should one start reading to find information about steps that have already been taken to protect coral reefs?

Which of the following would be the best topic sentence for the third paragraph?
OA.
Our family has wanted to build a swimming pool.
OB.
I have always wanted to eat pizza for breakfast.
OC. Life finally returned to normal on Sunday morning.
OD.
The air conditioner stopped working on Saturday.
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what is the difference between outdoor activities and playing video games?​

What happens to the ducklings when they come into the barn? What does this incident
reveal about Clover?

Match the definition to the term.

1.
expository
the most important thing in an article or story
2.
main idea
to inform, persuade, express feelings, entertain
3.
supporting details
what happens in a story
4.
narrative
writing which explains
5.
the plot of a story
determining similarities and differences
6.
the setting of a story
where and when a story happens
7.
author's purpose
people or animals in a story
8.
characters of a story
writing which tells a story
9.
comparing
ideas that support the main idea

Which two of Olive's actions bring about the main conflict in the passage? Olive runs home as fast as she can when the bees begin to sting her. Olive messes with the beehive without enough knowledge about bees. Olive does not worry about having to wear a hat or a jacket in the country. Olive watches the bee-master handle the bees without being stung. Olive does not pay heed to Charlie's warning about getting stung by the bees.​

Read the following selection from the section "The Debate Over Slavery Begins."

Slavery became a sticking point during the negotiations over political representation in Congress. Legally, enslaved black people were considered property. Yet Georgia and the Carolinas demanded they be counted as people when it came to calculating the number of representatives. Northern states refused.

What does the author mean by "sticking point"?

A
idea that started the negotiations
B
issue that led to disagreements
C
source of economic slowdown
D
series of insults back and for

Which piece of evidence from the article MOST
appeals to the reader's sense of emotion?

A."We are like the nameless grandmothers who
got in the streets and said 'We will make you
live up to what America says she is, " Williams
said.

B. "We didn't just come out here to have a
show." Sharpton said, adding, "Demonstration
without legislation will not lead to change."

C. While participants marched in Washington,
Sharpton called for those in other states to
march on their U.S. senators offices and
demand their support of federal policing
reforms.

D. In July, following Lewis' death, Democratic
senators reintroduced legislation that would
restore a provision of the Voting Rights Act of
1965 removed by the U.S. Supreme Court in
2013.

if anyone has read “song of the trees” please please please help with the following questions!!

HELP. WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST AND 50 POINTS

Review the module writing prompt.
How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.
Using what you learned in the lesson, write your thesis statement in response to the writing prompt.


I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud-

[1] I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
[5] Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
[10] Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
[15] A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
[20] In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

Calypso Borealis-

[1] After earning a few dollars working on my brother-in law's farm near Portage [Wisconsin], I set off on the first of my long lonely excursions, botanising in glorious freedom around the Great Lakes and wandering through innumerable tamarac and arbor-vitae swamps, and forests of maple, basswood, ash, elm, balsam, fir, pine, spruce, hemlock, rejoicing in their bound wealth and strength and beauty, climbing the trees, revelling in their flowers and fruit like bees in beds of goldenrods, glorying in the fresh cool beauty and charm of the bog and meadow heathworts, grasses, carices, ferns, mosses, liverworts displayed in boundless profusion.
[2] The rarest and most beautiful of the flowering plants I discovered on this first grand excursion was Calypso borealis (the Hider of the North). I had been fording streams more and more difficult to cross and wading bogs and swamps that seemed more and more extensive and more difficult to force one's way through. Entering one of these great tamarac and arbor-vitae swamps one morning, holding a general though very crooked course by compass, struggling through tangled drooping branches and over and under broad heaps of fallen trees, I began to fear that I would not be able to reach dry ground before dark, and therefore would have to pass the night in the swamp and began, faint and hungry, to plan a nest of branches on one of the largest trees or windfalls like a monkey's nest, or eagle's, or Indian's in the flooded forests of the Orinoco described by Humboldt.
[3] But when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank of a stream, growing not in the ground but on a bed of yellow mosses in which its small white bulb had found a soft nest and from which its one leaf and one flower sprung. The flower was white and made the impression of the utmost simple purity like a snowflower. No other bloom was near it, for the bog a short distance below the surface was still frozen, and the water was ice cold. It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy…
[6] Oftentimes I had to sleep without blankets, and sometimes without supper, but usually I had no great difficulty in finding a loaf of bread here and there at the houses of the farmer settlers in the widely scattered clearings. With one of these large backwoods loaves I was able to wander many a long wild fertile mile in the forests and bogs, free as the winds, gathering plants, and glorying in God's abounding inexhaustible spiritual beauty bread. Storms, thunderclouds, winds in the woods—were welcomed as friends.

Which sentence from the selection best conveys the author’s main message

"Letter from Birmingham Jail" is Martin Luther King Jr.'s response to a letter written by a group of white clergymen. Why do you think he didn't simply send his letter directly to them? Why did he have the letter published so everyone could read it?

How is Gatsby different from the the book and the 2013 movie