Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You will be super helpful..!!!
Here a few parts of my story not the full thing but lmk what you think...?
I skipped a part but its just a peek of it ... its not done yet

Can I Have Some Good Feed Back On The Story I Am Writing For My English Class...? You Will Be Super Helpful..!!!Here
Can I Have Some Good Feed Back On The Story I Am Writing For My English Class...? You Will Be Super Helpful..!!!Here

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Answer 1

Answer:

I really like it, seems cool!

Explanation:

good luck!


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Select two details from the text that best support the inference that Mr. Conway is a polite and courteous person.
A.
Barting had always seemed to me an honorable and truthful man, and the warm friendship which he expressed in his note for Mr. Conway was to me sufficient evidence that the latter was in every way worthy of my confidence and esteem.


B.
He greeted me coldly with merely a movement of the head and passed on, leaving me standing on the walk, with half–proffered hand...


C.
He hesitated a moment; then, looking me frankly in the eyes, said:

"I do not think, Mr. Foley, that I have any longer a claim to your friendship, since Mr. Barting appears to have withdrawn his own from me..."


D.
"I met him yesterday ten minutes before meeting you. I gave you exactly the same greeting that he gave me. I met him again not a quarter of an hour ago, and his manner was precisely the same: he merely bowed and passed on."


E.
"I shall not soon forget your civility to me. Good morning, or—as it may please you—farewell."

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Answer:

I think it is A and E

Explanation:

The other options you can cancel out because you can see how either they talked about his actions in a bad way or he just acted in a bad way.

Hope this helps!

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Answer:

System

Criteria

A Product of a System

A Natural System

I hope this helps

Answer:

1. system 2. constraints 3. a product of a system  4. natural system

Explanation:

Read this excerpt from The Way to Rainy Mountain.
Great green and yellow grasshoppers are everywhere in the tall grass, popping up like corn to sting the flesh, and tortoises crawl
about on the red earth, going nowhere in the plenty of time.
Why does the author use the simile "popping up like corn to sting the flesh' in this excerpt?
O to show the extent to which nature can harm people
O to convey the role that animals played on the Kiowa journey
O to reveal in images what the passage of time meant to the Kiowa
O to depict the grasshoppers' vastness and activity

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Answer:

The answer is to depict the grasshoppers' vastness and activity

Explanation:

The subtle
of the new
assignment was that I would be
complication
application
implication
working all weekend.

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Answer:

complication working all weekend

PLEASE HELP ASAP Why is it important to trace the connections between the practices of enslaved Africans and American culture?

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Well not only is it away to learn about the history if what happened, but I agree with Luxy, and that the practices make us more aware about the future and what problems it will bring.

Read the directions for making a vegetable and cheese omelet.

1. Crack two eggs in a bowl, and whisk them with a fork until the eggs are thoroughly blended.

2. Add 2 tablespoons of milk to the bowl and whisk.

3. Place a pan over medium heat, and lightly coat it with a non-stick cooking spray.

4. Pour the egg mixture into a pan, and cook until the edge of the egg turns a golden brown.

5. Sprinkle shredded cheese and chopped vegetables evenly on top of the egg. Continue cooking until the cheese begins to melt.

6. Using a spatula, carefully fold the egg in half.

7. Carefully slide the omelet onto a plate.

What would happen if a person completed step 6 before step 5?

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Answer:

the answer would be A. The cheese and vegetables would be on top of the eggs instead of folded inside them.

Explanation:

Answer: The answer is STEP 3 OR 1

Have A Blessed Day

Explanation:

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Which sentence from part 1 of The Call of the Wild best supports the theme “It is important to pick your battles”?

Thirty or forty huskies ran to the spot and surrounded the combatants in an intent and silent circle.
Though his dignity was sorely hurt by thus being made a draught animal, he was too wise to rebel.
Francois was stern, demanding instant obedience, and by virtue of his whip receiving instant obedience. . . .
Dave, who was an experienced wheeler, nipped Buck's hind quarters whenever he was in error.

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Answer:

Sentence 2

Explanation:

Answer:

I believe it is the second sentence.

Explanation:

Although he is hurt, he does not rebel because it would not be the best idea.

Who is on the guest list in the masked of red death

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Answer:The mysterious mass figure is the red death itself.

Explanation:

I need some help anybody know the answer

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Answer: Entertain

Explanation:

thye arent informing how u would do something or persuading soemthing either best choice entertain :)

The graph of a function g
is shown below.
Use the graph of the function to find its average rate of change from x=-3 to x=1
Simplify your answer as much as possible.

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*This is a maths problem.

Answer:

-2

Explanation:

Average rate of change of the function from x = -3 to x = 1 can be calculated using the formula below:

[tex] \frac{f(b) - f(a)}{b - a} [/tex]

Where,

[tex] a = -3, f(a) = 1 [/tex] (from the graph, when x = -3, y = 1)

[tex] b = 1, f(b) = -7 [/tex] (from the graph, when x = 1, y = -7)

Plug in the values into the formula:

[tex] = \frac{-7 - 1}{1 -(-3)} [/tex]

[tex] = \frac{-8}{4} [/tex]

[tex] = -2 [/tex]

Average rate of change from x = -3 to x = 1 is -2.

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows: Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more. Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more. What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

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Answer:

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Explanation:

In the original sentence, there is a repetition of the phrase "my father disliked" which makes it a case of repetition. The revised version replaces the repetition with a pronoun "he" and also replaced the verb "disliked" with a synonym "hated".

This correction makes the sentence better and the improvement gave the sentence a much clearer picture.

Thus, the correct answer is the last/ fourth option.

What was Faulkner's attitude toward the dog's death in "His Name Was Pete"? Support your response with evidence from the selection.​

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(sorry, my handwriting's a little off.)

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Which sentence describes a key difference between a historical timeline and a history brochure?

a.) A timeline organizes facts by topic while a brochure organizes facts chronologically.
b.) A timeline incorporates pictures and captions while a brochure only uses text.
c.) A timeline includes facts about events while a history brochure offers mostly opinions.
d.) A timeline covers many events while a brochure usually focuses on a single event.

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D) A timeline covers many events while a brochure usually focuses on a single event.

Choice ‘A’ would be false since it is the other way around ( timeline=chronological order)
Choice ‘B’ is false since brochures incorporate pictures as well.
Choice ‘C’ is also false

SOMEONE PLEASE HELP!!!!!!

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Answer:

ANSWER A i think i'm sorry if it's wrong.

Explanation:

I been writing this book, ssoooo, give me feedback and such. (The last screenshot is the synopsis)

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Answer:

cool. 5 STAR!

Explanation:

Answer:

wow! Its really great. Who taught you how to write like that

Explanation:

what does 'no taxation without representation' mean?

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Answer: The phrase taxation without representation describes a populace that is required to pay taxes to a government authority without having any say in that government's policies

Explanation:

The phrase taxation without representation describes a populace that is required to pay taxes to a government authority without having any say in that government's policies. The term has its origin in a slogan of the American colonials against their British rulers: "Taxation without representation is tyranny."1

PLZ HELP the question is: Write an informative essay on the topic of immigration. Your essay will use research to describe the changes and challenges that today's immigrant children experience. You're not allowed to say your experiences or opinion

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Answer:

Immigration enforcement—and the threat of such actions—can negatively impact a child's long-term health and development. A child's risk of having mental health problems like depression, anxiety, and severe psychological distress increases following the detention and/or deportation of a parent.

Explanation:

Many children of immigrants, including Latinos, live in families exposed to multiple risk factors such as poverty, poor schools, neighborhood violence, discrimination, and disparities in access to health care, education and jobs 2,71,73.Educational access affects the future life choices available to a child and the extent to which that individual can contribute civically and economically to his or her community. As such, access to education is important for all children, including immigrant children and citizen children of immigrant parents.

Which terms describes the particular way in which an author chooses words and forms them into sentences

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Answer:

1.style

2.dialect

3.voice

4.figurative language

Explanation:

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Write a letter from the perspective of the author (Louisa May Alcott) to one of the March girls about why she called the book Little Women. You may use outside sources to help add details. Your response should be no more than 100 words.

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Answer:

Did you end up getting that question right? and if so how did you change it?

Explanation:

LORD OF THE RINGS;
Discuss three incidents in which the boys have been saved on their
journey so far. Who saved them, what was happening at the time, and how
were they saved? Make sure your answer is very detailed.

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Answer:

wait why are you asking this question right now?

Explanation:

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What is a good prediction question to ask after reading this excerpt?

Why is the man using a hatchet to open the cage?
What will happen when Buck and the man interact?
Who will introduce Buck to the man in the red sweater?
Where did Buck learn the aggressive behavior he’s showing?

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Answer:

the second one

Explanation:

Answer:

its B

Explanation:

i took the test

The passage is an example of which rhetorical strategy? Why would this strategy be effective for this audience?
There is a just God who presides over the destinies of nations; and who will raise friends to fight our battles for us
(Speech to the Virginia Convention)
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Answer:

a

Explanation:

In "The Setting Sun and the Rolling World," what most worries Musoni?

A. He worries he will soon die.
B. He worries his son will get hurt.
C. He worries the airplane will crash.
D. He worries the charm won't work.

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Answer: B. He worries his son will get hurt.

Explanation:

Choose the sentence that is punctuated correctly.

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it’s c because u always put a comma after the action

Answer:

Hey buddy, here is your answer. Hope it helps you.

Explanation:

1. C option

2. D option

PLEASE HELP ME ASAP OMG-
Although Shakespeare’s plays were written in a meter called _______________, most plays of today are written in _________.

A) iambic pentameter; prose
B) prose; iambic pentameter
C) sonnet; iambic pentameter
D) iambic pentameter; sonnet

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Answer:

its b

Explanation:

shakespeare wrote in prose and nowadys its iambic pentameter

Answer:

A

Explanation:

Shakespear's plays were written in the iambic pentameter, today they are written in prose

"Make the first paragraph right aligned. Take a screenshot of the output and paste it in the space below." I'm not sure what it means by this because it didn't tell me what to write or where to write it. It gave me a bit to read at the beginning in the directions but idk if that's wut it was.

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Answer:Do you see the tool bar up top? Near the right there should be a 'Left align' 'Center align' and 'Right align'. You click on 'right align' and under the question would where you state your answer using 'right align'

Explanation:

Scientists have found that spending too much time on the Internet can cause_____.
A. addict
B. addicting
C. addiction
D. addictive​

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Hey :)

The answer is C. Addiction

Hope this helps!

Which statement BEST describes the relationship between primary and
secondary sources?
Select one:
O
Secondary sources diminish the impact of primary sources,
Secondary sources analyze, describe or interpret primary sources.
Secondary sources are used to discredit primary sources,
Secondary sources are less useful than primary sources,

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Answer:

secondary sources analyse, describe, or interpret primary sources

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Write a multiparagraph essay of at least five hundred words that answers the question: How do Crane and Lincoln treat the subject of the Civil War in each of their respective texts?

Construct a comparison outline to organize your ideas. Incorporate these ideas into your writing.

Submit your outline and the final draft of your essay. Your essay should be at least 500 words in length.

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The idea that war is an energizing, sentimental undertaking brimming with brilliance and courage has existed for quite a long time and proceeds somewhat today. 100 years back, notwithstanding, Stephen Crane set out to demolish these fantasies through his novel The Red Identification of Boldness, which follows the encounters of a youthful trooper in the American Common War. Crane shows the real essence of battle by differentiating Henry Fleming's sentimental desires with the truth that he experiences.

This differentiation between sentimental vision and cold reality can be seen right off the bat in the novel, with Henry's takeoff from home. Headed to a "delayed rapture of fervor" by the cheering group, Henry enrolls in the military and bids farewell to his mom with a "light of energy and anticipation in his eyes". He foresees a sentimental, nostalgic farewell suggestive of Simple occasions and even goes similarly as getting ready comments ahead of time which he wants to use "with contacting impact" to make "a wonderful scene."

Be that as it may, Crane presents a more practical view. At the updates on Henry's enrollment, his mom essentially says "The Master's will be done" and keeps draining the bovine, having recently asked Henry not to be "a numb-skull" by enrolling. She at that point annihilates his expectations by offering reasonable, useful exhortation in her farewell discourse. Her farewell is so unique in relation to what Henry expects that he is aggravated and "fretful under the trial" of the discourse.

Which two groups are most likely the author's intended audience in “Heads Up, Humans”?
A Students
B Teachers
C Young adults
D Older adults
E Technology professionals

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Answer:

Young adults

Explanation:

The two groups are most likely the author's intended audience in “Heads Up, Humans” is young adults. Hence option C is correct.

What is author?

Author is defined as one who is the originator of some kind of artistic or intellectual effort. The primary motivation for an author's writing is that author's purpose. The three main goals are to entertain, convince, and inform.  It powers communication, and communication provides society with a framework.

Young adult is defined as a distinct developmental stage that takes place between the ages of 18 and 25 years, during which the young adult can engage in self-exploration and identity building through the completion of important developmental activities.

Thus, the two groups are most likely the author's intended audience in “Heads Up, Humans” is young adults. Hence option C is correct.

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