Read the sentence from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown."
Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he wants to get away from his dad.
Which revision best clarifies what Greg is trying to do when he decides not to go home?
O Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he doesn't want to hear what his dad has to
say.
O Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he doesn't want to disagree with his dad.
O Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he wants to avoid a lecture from his dad.
Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he wants te dodge a run-in with his dad.

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Answer 1

The best revision to clarify the meaning of Greg's decision to not move towards his home would be:

C). Greg goes to the tenement building instead of going home because he wants to avoid a lecture from his dad.

"The Treasure of Lemon Brown"

In the context of the essay provided by the student, the third sentence i.e. most adequately revises the student's sentence to offer a clear idea. This states the reason more clearly that allows the readers to understand that he is avoiding his home due to his father and his lecture and arguments. Therefore, this promotes a better comprehension among them.

Thus, option C is the correct answer.

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List four words that are often used as transition words that show a chronological relationship.​

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Answer:

Transitions are words used to start a sentence, and in this case, to set an order of time. Words like first, then, next, and lastly are such examples.

Explanation:

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Answer:

Some of these words include first, next, then, and finally.

Explanation:

Chronological relates to events that are usually placed in the sequence they occurred. When writing events in a nonfiction book, a biography, an essay, or even a fiction novel, these word are often used to tell the time of events and the order in which they happened.

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Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
A.
Tam going home, I intend to stay there.
B.
I am going home; I intend to stay there.
C.
I am going home I intend to stay there
D.
I am going home-l intend to stay there

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Answer:

I am going home; I intend to stay there.

Explanation

Use a semicolon when you join two independent clauses with no connecting words.

2. Tag questions
a) There was a lot of traffic,​

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ANSWER : ISN'T IT

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Answer:

there was a lot of traffic, wasn't there?

Based on these excerpts what best describes the symbol of the go kart within the story

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list any four strenght for successful life?​

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Answer: Be authentic. Be yourself. ...

Be truthful. There is nothing of greater significance to offer your life or business than honesty. ...

Challenge yourself. In order to make the most of your life and career, challenge yourself. ...

Put love first. ...

Be thoughtful

Explanation:

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Answer:

Develop Mental Toughness

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Each of the following groups of statements includes one main idea and three supporting details.
A. There were ten women in the House of Representatives in 1970 and only one woman in the Senate.
B. In North Carolina, only a virgin could charge a man with criminals.
C. Divorce women were regarded as high risks by insurance companies, and they had trouble getting credit cards.
D. In the early 1970’s, women still had a long way to go in terms of gaining equal rights

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Answer:

I think there is a women is a North Carolina at 1970

Explanation:

so my answer is a north virgin of caroline

In which sentence does the verb agree with the subject?

A. The tone and pitch of the sparrow's song is pure and clear.
B. Hermit thrushes and wood thrushes is a delight to hear.
C. The lark and the robin are loved for their music.
D. Sunflower seeds or corn attract a variety of birds.

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Answer:

The sentence in which the verb agrees with the subject is:

C. The lark and the robin are loved for their music.

Explanation:

With just a couple of rules, we are able to answer this question easily. First, when we have a compound subject joined by "and", the verb should be plural, since it refers to both elements in the subject. That is why letters A and B are wrong. Letter C, however, does present a verb with a plural conjugation, which makes it correct.

When a compound subject is joined by "or", and one of the elements is plural, the verb will agree with the element that is nearer. Letter D is incorrect because "attract" should agree with "corn" and not "seeds".


Write one sentence that correctly combines a dependent clause and an
independent clause and uses a subordinating conjunction,
Your answer
This is a required questio

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Answer:

If you help me with my homework, I will give you a piece of candy

Explanation:

What does the katering Brush seem to be saying about birthdays in “birthday party”?

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Wdym when you say KATERING brush?

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Read this excerpt from "Collision Course."

But Mama said she'd had enough. My father, Dmitri, didn't want us to go. They had split when I was five. He refused to even listen to Mama’s arguments for taking me to Modesto, where she got a job, so there was no way to reach any kind of compromise or agreement. So we wound up in family court again and let the attorneys hash it out. Finally, the judge said that she believed moving would be beneficial for me and for Mama, and so we left.

Based on this excerpt, which term best describes how the author’s mother feels about their new future?

hopeful
worried
doubtful
excited

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Answer:

Pretty sure its hopeful

Explanation:

Answer:

A

Explanation:

Which of the following statements would the authors of both passages agree with

A. Native Americans were skilled hunters.

B. The buffalo were as important to the settlers as they were to the native Americans.

C. The settlers were in awe of the majestic buffalo.

D. Buffalo were important to Native American life, customs and traditions

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Answer:

D.

Explanation:

Buffalos were VERY important. The natives used every part. They ate the meat, made purses out of stomach and skin, made shelters out of skin, and made clothes out of hide.

Answer:

D.

Explanation:

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What do you think Vonnegut means when he says that he is a “Real person”? Why does he work so hard to convey this point? Explain your answer.

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Answer:

Vonnegut means when he says that he is a ""real person" is that some people damage his reputation by saying that his writing are fictitious and damage for the mind of student.

Explanation:

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some of poe's stories are called whodunits the detectives in these stories A. write poetry B.use secret codes C. solve puzzles D.lie about crimes

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the answer would be B, use secret codes

a silly puppy played in the yard what is the verb

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The answer is Played

Answer:

played

Explanation:

how does having a friend make it easier to get through the bad times in life and make the good times even better

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Answer: Having a friend makes it easier to get through the bad times in life and make the good times even better because friends are by your side no matter what. Friends play a significant role in promoting your overall health.

Your friends usually are trustworthy, loyal, and kind to you. They can make your day if you’re feeling down, or make your day even better.

Explanation:

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Select all that apply.
What are three important elements of an argumentative text?
a concluding statement
a side comment
a claim stated as a topic sentence
an entertaining introduction
pporting evidence

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Answer:

he purpose of argument writing is to convince a reader that a point of view is valid or to persuade the reader to take a specific action. Information is used, but it is organized based on these major components of an argument: claim, reason, evidence, counter-claim, and rebuttal.

Explanation:

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Which sentence contains an action verb, not a linking verb?

A. The bicycle was expensive.
B. We grew herbs in the school garden.
C. Dylan seems upset for some reason.
D. The flowers smell fragrant.

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Answer:

b.

is my guess it would make sense if it is, my bads if it's wrong fam

Explanation:

are these right? help please

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Answer:

yes those are right you can even look up the definition

Answer:100%. Also I like the Shrek!

Explanation:

What mood does the author create at the beginning of "Marigolds"? Support your answer with words and phrases from the text.​

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Answer:

GLOOMY

The mood in this story has two parts. One is part of growing up is learning that there are consequences to one's action. The second is all human beings need beauty in their life. The marigolds represent the beauty in the gloomy town, the beauty in Miss Lottie's dull life.

Explanation:

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Answer:

At the beginning of Marigolds, marigolds represent beauty and happiness in the sad town and Miss Lottie's life which was boring and bleak. After Elizabeth comes and destroys the marigolds, Miss Lottie's life is once again dull and boring because she has nothing else to bring happiness to her.

Afterward, Elizabeth realizes what she has done and begins to regret her actions which have adversely affected Miss lottie

The Dawn’s Awake
By Otto Leland Bohanan

The Dawn’s awake!
A flash of smoldering flame and fire
Ignites the East. Then, higher, higher,
O’er all the sky so gray, forlorn1,
The torch of gold is borne.

The Dawn’s awake!
The dawn of a thousand dreams and thrills.
And music singing in the hills
A paean2 of eternal spring.
Voices the new awakening.

The Dawn’s awake!
Whispers of pent-up harmonies,
With the mingled fragrance of the trees;
Faint snatches of half-forgotten song--
Fathers! Torn and numb,--
The boon of light we craved, awaited long,
Has come, has come!

1Pitifully sad and abandoned or lonely
2A song of praise or triumph

Directions: Identify the type of figurative language that best fits the bolded words or phrases. Then explain how each one helps develop imagery within the poem. Remember that your responses should be at least 3-5 sentences in length.

The Dawn’s awake!
It is personification,

Eternal spring
Hyperbole,

Has come, has come!
Repetition,

The Black Land
By Joseph Warren Beach

I will pough the land,
Turning up the black soil.
I will ride upon this heaving surface
As a boat rides upon the water.
Even as a boat
Cleaving the water with an eager keel,
I have run a furrow1
Straight across the ridges.

I will sow down this field,
Scattering gems.
With both hands will I scatter
Quivering emeralds out of a bottomless pouch.

As I tread the loam2
My feet sink deep.
The black earth embraces my ankles
And clings to my bent knees.

I sing as I go
Scattering emeralds.
The wind sings upon my lips,
And pearls stream off my neck and forehead.
I am bathed in a sweat of pearls.

Eyes straight forward
Rest on a brightening ultimate slope.

1A long narrow trench made in the ground by a plow.
2Soil with equal amounts of sand, silt, and clay.

Directions: Identify the type of figurative language that best fits the bolded words or phrases. Then explain how each one helps develop imagery within the poem. Remember that your responses should be at least 5-7 sentences in length.

I will ride upon this heaving surface / As a boat rides upon the water.

The black earth embraces my ankles / And clings to my bent knees.



And pearls stream off my neck and forehead. I am bathed in a sweat of pearls.


















Could you answer any question you find please?

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Answer:

metaphors, similes and hyperbole are the figurative languagesin here

In the third stanza, "strangest Sea" is an example of
A. enjambment.
B. consonance.
c. an extended metaphor.
D. a persona of the writer.

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The answer is B thxs for letting me help you

How "old" do Elie and his Father become when they enter the camps?

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Answer:

They become 18 and 40

Explanation:

In the book Elie and his father have to lie about their age so that they don't get selected to go in the furnace.

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THIS IS WORTH SO MANY POINTS!!

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Answer:

I'm not sure but i think the second one because alliteration means the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words and the second one has the letter B and there are closly connected words with the letter

Answer:

2)Behemoth biggest born of ear,upheaved his vastness

  (John Milton,¨Paradise Lost¨)

                   and

3)Of cloudless climes and starry skies

(Lord Byron,¨She Walks in Beauty¨)

Explanation:

reason why i chose these because when your doing aliteration usually the words starts with the same letters for example (she slowly sat ) so yeah.

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I will have gone to Kathmandu tomorrow morning which tense is this​

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Answer:

Present tense

Explanation:

Answer:

well it hasn't happened yet so what tense you think it is ?

Write a story that ends with the following lines.
..........Nevertheless, it was my best experience.
[Points to remember while writing a story. (a) Word limit 150-200
words. (b)There should be a beginning, character introduction,
Plot, conclusion and moral for the story.]

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Answer:

When I was eighteen I decided I wanted to travel alone. I bought a ticket to Australia, I packed my bags and I left for the airport. I had to do a scale in Italy and then I had to take the flight there to go to Australia. I had to wait four more hours and I was sleepy so I decided to take a nap and set an alarm to wake up in time for my flight. But I didn't. I missed it and I got stranded in the airport for one whole day. It was the first thing that went wrong but not the only one. When I finally arrived to Australia, I had a lot of bad experiences. I felt lonely, I lost money and I missed home. However, I also made friends for life, I discovered amazing landscapes and I had the time of my life. So, nevertheless, it was my best experience.

Explanation:

To complete this exercise, you have to write a story that ends with the line given. Since the line has the word "nevertheless" included, you should write about something that was bad or went wrong but ended up being "the best experience". It's important to follow the rules given, which are the word limit and the different parts of a story.

How does Martha proceed after meeting the faith-cure man?

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She follows all of his instructions and convinces herself they are working. With no other available options, she follows his instructions despite knowing that they will not work.

With no other available options, she follows his instructions despite knowing that they will not work. ... He recites prayers in another language and impresses Martha with his knowledge.
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If what you are wearing to a job interview has belt loops, you must wear a belt.

True
False

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false, some jobs don’t allow you to wear specific things. Because it’s against dress code. Hope this helps !

In the case when the person is wearing to a job interview that contained the belt loops so you did not wear the belt.

What is a job interview?

It is the interview that should be conducted between the applicant and the interviewer for assessing whether the required applicant is competitive or not for the selection.

Also, some jobs don't permit you to wear particular things as it should be against the dress code.

therefore, the given statement is false.

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5) Which word BEST describes the author's feelings about Iceland?
A)
alarmed
B)
disappointed
©).
fascinated
D) reassured

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Answer:

which author? what story?

Explanation:

more info is needed.

How do i write By the time I got here, the chickens jad eaten the entire bag or pellets in future perfect sense. ​

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Answer:

By the time I had gotten there the chickens had eaten the entire bag of pellets.

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Are we supposed to answer in Elspanol or English?

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