please help!! I have to rewrite this and find 10 grammar errors!!

Answer:

On January 24, 1848, a discovery within a river near Coloma, California. This discovery changed the course of territory forever. While building a saw mill, James Wilson Marshal found a golden nugget by accident. All through the mill owner tried to keep the find a secret, new of his discovery soon started what is known as the “California Gold Rush.” By 1850, so many people lived in Californiana that it became the 31st state of the United States.

Explanation:

Grammar Errors. ⬇️

Know= Known

Tryed= Tried

“California Gold Rush” = “California Gold Rush.”

For ever = Forever

in a river = within a river

Coloma, California changed = Coloma, California. This Changed

so many people live in =  so many people lived in

by 1850, = By 1850,

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