How can you revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence
patterns? The planets orbit the sun. Jupiter is the largest planet. Saturn
is a planet with rings. Earth is the third planet from the sun.
Select one:
Revise the sentences so that they describe different planets.
Shorten the sentences.
Add dependent clauses to some sentences.
Add dependent clauses to all the sentences.

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Answer 1

Answer:

Add dependent clauses to some sentences.

Explanation:

The best way to revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence

patterns is to add dependent clauses to some sentences.

The planets orbit the sun. Jupiter is the largest planet. Saturn

is a planet with rings. Earth is the third planet from the sun.


Related Questions

Read the sentence below and answer the following question:

During the whole of a dull, dark, and soundless day in the autumn of the year, when the clouds hung oppressively low in the heavens, I had been passing alone, on horseback, through a singularly dreary tract of country, and at length found myself, as the shades of the evening drew on, within view of the melancholy House of Usher.—Poe, "The Fall of the House of Usher"

Which of the following is true about the author's syntax in this passage?

a. It emphasizes a minor fear.
b. It introduces a specific person.
c. It sets a formal tone.
d. It suggests a coming storm.

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Answer:

c. It sets a formal tone.

Explanation:

Syntax presents the rules of the language and the way it is formed in the sentences and speech. It is the way words are put in the sentences and correct forms of using them in order to understand the message fully.

Here, the way language is used puts the atmosphere of the setting. It sets the tone of mystery, creepiness, darkness, and explains the mood of the character and the place they are visiting. The words are mostly adjectives to explain the setting and they are put together in the sentences that paint the picture of the place which sets the tone of the story.

Answer:

The correct answer is "c. It sets a formal tone."

Explanation:

I just completed the test and got 100% by choosing that one. I hope this helps!

Where did Santa Claus come from? A Dutch word that is actually Sinter Claus, Saint Nicholas, in English early Bishop of a church in Asia Minor (modern day Turkey) both answers are correct O none of the above

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Answer:

Both of these are correct.

Explanation:

Saint Nicholas was born around

280 A.D. He was born in Myra, in Modern day Turkey. The name Santa klaus was gotten from his Dutch nickname, sinter Klaas which also has its origins from his name Saint Nicholas. Saint Nicholas is regarded as the protector of children and also sailors. It was said that he gave out all his inherited riches and lived his life traveling, and helping the sick and poor.

Which of these factors resulted in the creation of a reality in which people are "always on"? A. The widespread availability of the Internet in homes B. The expense of home desktop computers C. The number of people who use landline phones D. The limited number of public pay phones​

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Answer:

A. The widespread availability of the Internet in homes

Explanation:

Answer:

This is easy. I can tell you the answer is probably A.

Explanation:

B- wrong because this would discourage people

C- wrong people aren't connected to the internet and social media through landlines

D- wrong has nothing to do with the question

*Some advice that will help you with your future quizzes*

Brush up on some generic test taking skills for like the ACT or something like that. Process of elimination comes in handy with tricky questions like these.

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if you complete this poem i'll give u branliest (depends)
+ make sure most of them rhyme
+ for the belief part dont put anything related to religion

i am _______
i believe _______
i am inspired by ______
i am good at ______
i inspire ______
i worry ______
i anticipate ______
i miss ______
i regret ______
i admire ______
i will _____

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Answer:

I am a hopeless optimistic

I believe humility and goodness win in the end

I am inspired by dreams, even if unrealistic

I am good at supporting and caring for a friend

I inspire confidence in those who need it

I worry about what is truly important

I anticipate finding goodness where I seek it

I miss the time when all greed was dormant

I regret every missed chance to be kind

I admire those who can open their mind

I will remember those who brightly have shined

Explanation:

I did not worry much about the meter, but focused instead of making the lines rhyme. The rhyme scheme is: ABAB CDCD EEE. The poem's theme revolves around being optimistic and kind. The speaker is willing to learn from his/her past mistakes and become a better person. He/She is also determined to see the good in other people.

What is the grammatical function of the gerund phrase? In the 1930s, Penguin Books started publishing inexpensive paperback books and, in the process, discovered a thriving new market of voracious readers seeking cheap, well-bound books.

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Answer:

thriving new market

Explanation:

The term 'gerund' refers to the 'ing' form of the verb and it functions as a noun. It represents both the meaning of the verb as well as a noun in the sentence. A gerund can replace a noun in the sentence and give its meaning.

In the context, the gerund phrase is the " thriving new market". The noun 'thrive' is also used as the verb. Here in the sentence the gerund phrase refers to the prosperous and the growing market of the paperback books where readers seeks cheap and well bounded books.

Answer:

publishing inexpensive paperback books

Explanation:

this is the answer for a ixl

Coleen’s knee injury ______ her from furthering her career as a long distance runner.

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Answer:

precludes?

Explanation:

Rodney didn't get the yard landscaped by himself. Him and Charles worked together to plant trees, shrubs, and flowers. When the homeowners saw the yard, they were thrilled with the results.

Which underlined word, if any, demonstrates an error?
A. they

B. No error

C. him

D. himself

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Answer:

A?

Explanation:

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I will give brainliest

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Answer: it very simple basiclly you need to put the meant of the word and give it a reason why you chose that word

Explanation:

Audience:the assembled spectators or listeners at a public event, such as a play, movie, concert, or meeting.

reason : to explain etc

QUICK I WILL GIVE U BRAINLIEST!!!! Read this stanza from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe.

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore—
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
"'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door—
Only this and nothing more."

How does what happens in this stanza propel the action in the poem?


It gives the speaker a reason to speak to the raven.


It introduces the story and sets up the coming events.

It resolves the main conflict of the story.

It establishes why Lenore has left the speaker alone.

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Answer is eiher 2 or 3

Explanation:

hope that helps!

Answer:

It introduces the story and sets up the coming events.

Explanation:

Which quotation has the correct punctuation and capitalization?

A. My mother, a wise woman in many ways, always said she “never understood the power of positive thinking.”
B. Benjamin Franklin once said “a penny saved is a penny earned.”
C. Paris, France, is known as “The city of lights.”
D. As a philosopher who was wise for his young age once said “it has taken too long for change.”

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C is the right answer hope this helps

The following paragraph is part of a persuasive essay and is complete except
for its final sentence.
Based on personal testimonies, financial statistics, and the
rising cost of college tuition, the most advisable course of
action is for parents to begin saving money for a college
fund as early as possible. So many parents and students
have alleviated financial strain because of a college fund
started at birth
What should the last sentence be?
O A. No matter how little you think you have to save, saving just a little
every time you get a check makes a significant difference.
O B. Although this method does not work for everyone, college savings
funds can be a great benefit.
O C. Families will benefit greatly from setting aside college savings and
should have a separate fund for each child.
O D. Families will benefit greatly from setting aside college savings.
SUBMIT

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Answer:D

Explanation:

Did the quiz

Answer: D is correct

Explanation:

2° Complete these sentences with be / get used to + ing form.
1.He ……………….. (work) 10 hours a day!
2.I ……………… (get) up at 6am after a few years.
3.We ……………. (not / watch) those kinds of films before we meet you.

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1. Used to work
2. Got used to getting
3. Didn’t use to watch


What is another negative effect
of spending lots of time playing
esports?

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Answer:

Can strain eyes

Explanation:

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Answer:

Can strain eyes.

Explanation:

I got it right

How does Steve's attempt to reason with his neighbors affect other elements of the story?

Please help!
Story: The monsters are due on maple street

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The neighbours calm down and go home for a while. The neighbours become suspicious of him as-well. The neighbours elect Steve their leader.

Answer:

It seems the people are getting more upset with Steve and turning on him and others.

Explanation:

I tried to read the excerpt from the story and it seemed as if the neighbors were getting more upset with Steve. They talked about how even his wife was talking bad about him. In quote, "Myra's talked about how there's been plenty of nights you spent hours down in your basement workin' on some kind of radio or something. Well, none of us have ever seen that radio—" This seems as if they are becoming more nervous and trusting Steve less. hopefully this helped you at least a little and I actually found the right book you were talking about. If it doesn't, please let me know and I'll try again.

What is the best way for the author to combine sentences 1 and 2? A. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s, and this sport takes place on a long oval track. B. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s; while this sport takes place on a long oval track. C. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s, this sport takes place on a long oval track. D. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s and this sport takes place on a long oval track.

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I've looked this question up, and this is the excerpt it refers to:

(1) Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s. (2) This sport takes place on a long oval track. (3) Participants earn points by skating past, or "lapping," members of the other team. (4) Roller derby is primarily played by women, and most skaters are amateurs who raise their own support in order to participate. (5) Many skaters wear fun costumes and adopt fake names to express their personalities. (6) Because many injuries can occur at roller derbies, emergency medical personnel are required to stay rinkside, and skaters must wear protective gear at all times.

Answer:

The best way to combine sentences 1 and 2 is:

A. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s, and this sport takes place on a long oval track.

Explanation:

Option B uses the conjunction "while" unnecessarily. When we read the sentence, we feel there should be more information afterward, because of the presence of "while". We can eliminate option B for that reason.

Options C and D are also incorrect. They are both run-on sentences. Option C does not use any conjunctions to connect the two independent clauses. Option D does use a conjunction, but no punctuation.

Option A is the best choice. It uses a coordinating conjunction to connect the independent clauses, as well as proper punctuation:

A. Roller derby is a high contact extreme sport that began in the United States during the 1920s, and this sport takes place on a long oval track.

why does tilly pull over when chasing goldfinger?

A. Her car engine stops

B. She is mad a Bond

C. Bond slashes her tire

D. She thinks Bond is interfering

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Answer:C, bond slashes her tire.

Explanation: Something comes out of Bond’s tire that slashes her tire.

__ refers to the attitude an author gives when writing

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Answer:

..

Explanation:

The author's attitude is expressed through the words and details he or she selects. For example, textbooks are usually written with an objective tone which includes facts and reasonable explanations. ... Often objective tone uses higher level words and avoids pronouns such as I and you, creating a formal tone.

Answer:

Tone

Explanation:

The attitude of the speaker is also known as tone. The way in which the mood of a piece of work are created and presented. It gives a voice to the characters and often evokes an emotion from the readers.

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100 POINTS FOR A 100 WORD PARAGRAPH!! Write a short creative passage (about 100-150 words) using Elizabethan English. Use at least ten of the Elizabethan words correctly; highlight them with bold font. It might be easiest to include dialogue. (Need inspiration? Write about a huge feast or party, or write a boy-meets-girl story.) Title this section "My Elizabethan Language Paragraph."

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Answer:

Explanation:

Doctors have come from distant cities

just to see me

stand over my bed

disbelieving what they’re seeing

They say I must be one of the wonders

of god’s own creation

and as far as they can see they can offer

no explanation

Newspapers ask intimate questions

want confessions

they reach into my head

to steal the glory of my story

They say I must be one of the wonders Of god’s own creation

And as far as they can see they can offer

No explanation

O, I believe fate smiled and destiny

laughed as she came to my cradle know this child will be able

laughed as my body she lifted

know this child will be gifted

with love, with patience and with faith

she’ll make her way

People see me

I’m a challenge to your balance

I’m over your heads

how I confound you and astound you

to know I must be one of the wonders

of god’s own creation

and as far as you can see you can offer me

no explanation

O, I believe

fate smiled and destiny

laughed as she came to my cradle

know this child will be able

laughed as she came to my mother

know this child will not suffer

laughed as my body she lifted

know this child will be gifted

with love, with patience and with faith

she’ll make her way

No, my countrymen, shut your ears against this unhallowed language. Shut your hearts against the poison which it conveys; . . .

The author’s use of parallel structure and repetition in these sentences contributes to the argumentative tone by —
a. inciting resentment in his readers
b. encouraging a logical response from his readers
c. explaining the truth of his argument to his readers
d. inflaming his readers against those who oppose him

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Answer:

Explanation:

My answer is...d?

If you have read the cat who thought she was a dog please write a summary of the story!!

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Answer:The moral of the story is that the mirror only shows the skin on the outside of you, the real image of a person is on the inside, in the willingness to help himself and others he comes in contact with. This mirror reveals the very soul of a person.

Explanation:

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Since squid are fast swimmers they are good at catching prey. where do you put the comma plss help

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Answer:

i think after the word swimmers

Explanation:

Answer:

Since squid are fast swimmers, they are good at catching prey.

Explanation:

Comma goes after swimmiers

In his Stanford University Commencement Speech, Steve Jobs said, "Don't let the noise of others' opinions drown out your own inner voice. ...Have the courage to follow your heart and intuition." Do you personally agree or disagree with this statement? Why? How do you think Jobs exemplified this in his daily life? You may choose to review the excerpt from Steve Jobs: The Many Who Thought Different in order to find supporting details. Your response should be about 150 words.

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Answer:

"Don't let the noise of others' opinions drown out your own inner voice" implementation

Explanation:

I personally agree this statement of Steve Jobs " Don't let the noise of others' opinions drown out your own inner voice. Have the courage to follow your heart and intuition"

I agree, because a person can be happy by following only what his / her own heart & mind say, not the footprints of others. Diluting self personality because of world's perceptions is derogatory for personal, professional growth.

Jobs exemplifies this in his daily life by practicing what he preached. He left university for starting apple. He later also took many brave decisions, stated that 'I want to put a dent in universe'. He innovated & became a leader. So, he followed his inner voice, irrespective of people's opinion regarding the same.

Answer: I personally agree this statement of Steve Jobs " Don't let the noise of others' opinions drown out your own inner voice. Have the courage to follow your heart and intuition" I agree, because an individual can be happy by following just what his/her own heart and mind say, not the footprints of others. Diluting self personality because of world's perceptions is derogatory for personal, professional growth. Jobs exemplifies this in his daily life by practicing what he preached. He left university for starting apple. He later also took many brave decisions, stated that 'I want to put a dent in universe'. He innovated and became a leader. Thus, he followed his inner voice, irrespective of individuals' opinion regarding the same.

Explanation:

Part A

In the article “Caring for Vets Should Be National Duty,” what inference can be made regarding the healthcare services provided by the U.S. Department of Veterans Affairs?


They are superior to healthcare options for active duty military personnel.

They are comparable to healthcare options civilian enjoy.

They are often difficult to access and need improvement.

They are provided by unqualified medical professionals.
Question 2
Which evidence best supports the answer in Part A?

Select the two correct answers.


"Last fall—16 years after the War on Terror began—the VA was still flooded with serious complaints about patient care; earlier this year, concerns about doctor shortages made headlines."

"Announced on Sept. 11—an appropriate date—the arrangement sets aside more than $200 billion to improve the health care services provided by the U.S. Department of Veterans’ Affairs."

"Tales of delays and deficiencies, including long waits and poor access to proper care, have plagued the VA since injured vets started returning from Afghanistan and Iraq following 9/11."

“Our wounded veterans deserve not only exemplary health care, but all the tools they need to re-assimilate into civilian life despite missing limbs or shattered psyches.”

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Answer:

PART A-

They are often difficult to access and need improvement.

PART B-

"Last fall—16 years after the War on Terror began—the VA was still flooded with serious complaints about patient care; earlier this year, concerns about doctor shortages made headlines."

"Tales of delays and deficiencies, including long waits and poor access to proper care, have plagued the VA since injured vets started returning from Afghanistan and Iraq following 9/11."

Hope this helps it's a little late tho lol

Explanation:

How do I combine these sentence pairs together using a semicolon or a comma and a conjunction .

-Our team won the playoff game. We celebrated our victory with pizza.

-I want to go outside . It is too hot.

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I want to go outside, it is too hot.

Our team won the playoff game; we celebrated our victory with pizza

How does the sun's energy affect
Earth's atmosphere?
FIGURE 6
Earth's atmosphere is a system made up of
many different parts.
Communicate In the space below, draw
a picture or a diagram that helps you under-
stand the relationship between the concepts
in the word bank. Explain your diagram to
a classmate.

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Answer: The sun's radiation warms the earth's atmosphere and surface and becomes heat energy.

Explanation:

I need to find 10 to 11 mistakes in this. Please help me.

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Answer:

The mistakes are bolded.

Explanation:

Alan Alexander Milne authored a series of beloved children's books about a stuffed bear named Winnie-the-Pooh. The stories were based on his son Christopher Robin Milne. E.H. Shepard illustrated the books using his own son's bear, Growler, as the model. Originally named Edward, the bear was renamed Winnie-the-Pooh after Winnie, a Canadian World War I mascot, who went to live at the London zoo. Hope this helps :)

At which point in Perseus’s life does the excerpt begin?

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Answer:

Wheres the excerpt? can you post that so we can give you an answer.

Explanation:

What is a determiner

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Answer:

a person or thing that determines or decides something

Explanation:

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Answer:

There are 2 definitions:

Number 1. A person or thing that determines or decides something.

Number 2. A modifying word that determines the kind of reference a noun or noun group has, for example a, the, every.

Explanation:

How does the narrator’s point of view influence how the story or event is described? *

a. The story is not influenced by who tells the story.
b. The story is only influenced by who tells the story if it's told in third person omniscient point of view.
c. The story can be influenced by the narrator's experiences and emotions.
d. The story is always influenced by all character's emotions.

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I think the answer is c

Which places are associated with the heroes, and which are associated with the monsters? Where do the struggles between the heroes and monsters take place?

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Answer:

1)Heroes:HideoutBuilding like the ones the Avengers have

Monster: some weird place or like a cave

2) In battle

It is the base of operations for the superhero Batman, whose real name is Bruce Wayne, and his allies, and it is located in caves beneath Wayne Manor, Wayne's home.

What superhero can lift the most?

The incredible thing about the Hulk is that, in contrast to virtually every other superhero ever made, the Hulk's strength has no upper bound. When he is at his most composed, he can lift a commercial airplane, which weighs about 100 tonnes, with no problem.

The outfit, the car, and the gadgets are just a few of the recognizable superhero accessories. But there is one comic book cliché that really stands out: the secret lair. Other superheroes have private hideouts that serve as storage facilities for their superhero gear and any other services they might require. In the DC universe, there are many such lairs, some of which are more recognizable than others. They are used for containment, research, development, or simply as a place for the hero to withdraw and brood.

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