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After a while, Sarah and her grandfather got their lives together and Sarah applied for multiple jobs to help out her and her grandfather. After all, Sarah was 15, going on 16, and was becoming a young adult.

I kinda put a little too much "after" in this paragraph. Can anyone help me get rid of that and replace it with something better? TY

Answer:

After a while, Sarah and her grandfather got their lives together and Sarah applied for multiple jobs to help out her and her grandfather. Ultimately, Sarah is 15, going on 16, and was becoming a young adult.

Explanation:

Sarah and her grandfather eventually got their lives together, which prompted Sarah to apply for multiple jobs, allowing for even more support for the duo.

I dont think the second part is particularly neccesary, as it kinda contradicts the first half of the paragraph- which says that Sarah needs a job for added support, but the second half seems to say Sarah needs a job because she is growing up.

Also, most places wont hire anyone until they are 16.

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What is the theme of the poem?

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In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on Greg by showing him the value of the bond between fathers and sons. Greg then appreciates his own father better, despite his father’s shortcomings.

What is the best way to revise the last sentence?

replace “Greg then” with “In conclusion, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “Therefore, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “Consequently, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “So, Greg”
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SHARKS' TEETH
Langston Carter

The day we found the sharks' teeth was foggy and cool. Moisture hung in the air so thick you could almost see it sparkling in the dim sunlight. There were days, early in the summer like this one, where it seemed there was more water in the air than in the bay. We had beached the boat and stepped out on the recently cleared spit of land. The ground had a light dusting of white sand over an under layer of dried black mud. It looked like a recently frosted chocolate cake, though the frosting was spread a bit thin for my taste. The ground was solid, but we knew from experience that it was full of fiddler crab holes, and would be underwater at the first super-high tide. Mysteriously, to us anyway, someone wanted to build a house there.

We often came to these spots to look for artifacts. Our beach, our summer home, had been a fishing camp for as long as anyone living could remember. The oldest stories told of travelers coming down to the edge of the sea, lining up to fill their wagon beds with salted fish to take back home. Old decaying cabins still lined the beach. Rotting nets, hung out to dry in the last century, decorated their weathered walls. Their broken faces spun stories in our minds. The fishermen who, tanned and wrinkled from sun and salt, hauled their nets full of splashing mullet in to cheers from the waiting crowds. The bounty of the sea lightened everyone's hearts, and the smell of roasting fish filled the damp air. Women fanned themselves from wagon seats. Children splashed in the shallow edges of the bay. It was a scene we had acted out as youngsters, building an imaginary bridge to a life we would never fully know.

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We had beached the boat and stepped out on the recently cleared spit of land.

What is the best explanation for beached the boat based on the context of this sentence? (5 points)

Question 20 options:

1)

Created an anchor for the boat on shore

2)

Not taken the boat on that day

3)

Returned the boat to its harbor

4)

Stopped or parked the boat

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Or fester like a sore—
And then run?

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It creates an uncertain tone.

It creates a sorrowful tone.

It creates an earnest tone.

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Recognizing Effective Details
So it was not impossible that I,
Banished to the outfield and daydreaming
Of water, or a hotel in the mountains,
Would suddenly find myself in the path
Of a ball stung by Joe Barone.
I watched it closing in
Clean and untouched, transfixed
By its easy arc before it hit
My forehead with a thud.

—"How I Learned English,"
Gregory Djanikian

What types of details does the author describe to draw the reader into the scene? Check all that apply.

tastes
sounds
sights
thoughts
smells

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2 - sounds
3 - sights
4 - thoughts

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B.
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C.
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E.
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Select the correctly punctuated sentence.

Select one:
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What is a theme of "Harlem [2]"?


It is better to be practical than to be a dreamer.

Any dream can come true with determination.

Putting aside a dream leads to hopelessness.

Everyone has equal opportunities in life.
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Part B

How does Langston Hughes develop the theme identified in Part A?


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He hints that people should work hard toward achieving their dreams.

He suggests that people put dreams aside and focus on opportunities.

He suggests that some dreams can wear heavily on a person.

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