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Revise the paragraphs below by combining sentences, fixing faulty parallelism and coordination, and correcting other sentence faults such as fragments and run-ons.

Answer:

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Explanation:

Ok so you say State House twice in the first sentence, so maybe you could try using other words.

You also say, "Now known as the Liberty bell." And you say it right after saying that we call the hall Independence Hall, so say something like:

'And now, we call the bell, Liberty Bell.'

Put a comma after Pennsylvania Assembly. (First paragraph Fourth Sentence)

When you say "It would right to call lawmakers to meetings." Did you mean ring?

In paragraph 2, connect sentences 4 &5.

Otherwise it looks really good! You got good skill!!!

Hopefully that helped!

Which of the following quotes does NOT use a metaphor? "I Have a Dream"

Lady Macbeth refers to many events and conversations in her sleep-walking scene. Chart as many as you notice: Textual Evidence Explanation / reference to what event

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Peer pressure can be a good thing.
What evidence from the passage supports this statement?
A Some young people decide to go with the flow regardless of what they
know is right and lose their sense of self.
B SADD is a student group that works to save lives by spreading the word
about the dangers of risky behaviors.
С People's peers often influence their decisions and can push them to make
bad choices, even dangerous ones.
D Schuyler W. did not want to go camping, but his friends convinced him to,
and he had a great time.

find the sums and difference whats 2/4 plus 3/4
4/5 mines 1/2
4 1/5 plus 1 1/5
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If you find a hurt animal that you're able to help, is it moral to come to its rescue, as we would with a human? Or is it true compassion to let nature take its course? Explain your answer and provide specific examples from life, the stories you've heard, the movies you've seen or the books you've read. ​

In a novel, a woman lives a lonely life in which she is
encouraged to marry a rich man to ensure her financial
security. Her brothers are merchants. The woman decides
to ignore her family's advice to marry and instead takes a
job on a train that travels through Europe, where she is
inspired by the landscapes and the people she meets to
write poetry. On the train, she meets a handsome stranger
and falls in love.
Which element of the story most clearly identifies it as an example of
Romantic literature?
A. The story's themes involve feminism.
B. The story's central conflict relates to money.
C. The story centers on love between two people.
O D. The story celebrates creative inspiration

Write an essay about: How could robots affect our world? (400 words) I would greatly appreciate it and will give brainliest to first person. No plagiarism.

from americans shifting viws on immigration how do parargraph 37-38 contribute of the devolepement of ideas in the text

(1) Many people experience a sense of therapeutic well-being when gardening. (2) While harvesting a healthy crop of organic fruits and vegetables may be the obvious benefit, there is also something to be said about the sense of calmness that digging in the dirt, sowing seeds, and cultivating plants can give a person. (3) The gardeners also decide what types of pesticides, if any, are used on the produce in the garden. (4) A few hours away from the hustle of daily life can help to de-stress and even reenergize a person. (5) Gardens are serene places where deadlines and errands are unimportant. (6) So, not only can gardening result in healthier eating habits, it can also provide an escape from the daily pressures of school, work, and family.

Which sentence is off-topic?

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Give an example of mircroaggression

answer asap please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!​

it flows onto the land like a giant bulldozer, snapping trees like twigs.

Which statement best expresses how the author organizes the ideas in this excerpt?

Is the song "Friday" by Rebecca Black appropriate for school? I am asking since my science teacher always put a song for Friday and she uses the same song all the Fridays, so I wanted to email her to request a song, and I want to use the song "Friday" by Rebecca Black, can you guys help me to write an email saying that I want to request a song that is "Friday" by Rebecca Black? I want the email to be formal and appropriate and asking if it's possible. Thank you, I'm giving a lot of points and brainliest, it should be an easy task :D

I want to get into fashion and clothes like where can I buy clothes online ?

Get 2 synonyms and make sure they rhime.

If a puppy is described as whimpering pathetically, which of the following is most likely true

A.The sound is quiet and mostly unnoticed.
B.The noise causes people to feel pity or sorrow.
C.The puppy seems energetic and eager to please.
Other dogs around it are howling or whimpering, too.

(100 PINTS AND BRAINLIEST ASAP
WHAT DOSE THE RULE OF LAW MEAN IN YOUR OWN WORDS
500 WORDS

Someone you can trust and share similar interests with is _______________.
a.
a family member
b.
a colleague
c.
both a and b
d.
a friend

“Plants need sunlight to grow.” Which of these is the best supporting details.

A. My favorite kind of plant is the Venus fly trap.

B. Plants that get sunlight grow taller than those who don’t

C. There are many different species of plants on Earth.

D. Jessica sat in the sun and looked at her garden.

Who is the protagonist in “The Strangers That Came to Town”???

Answer quickly please

23 POINTS + BRAINLIEST

Explain why cross-referencing a topic is a good idea when conducting research.

because it allows a student to explore different points of view and come up with an angle
because it allows students to research different kinds of data bases and see what the rest of the publishing world thinks
because narrowing a topic is difficult and students always need to do more research
because narrowing a topic is one of the primary skills that all students must master before writing a paper

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This question has two parts. Be sure to answer both parts of
the question.
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compare the two
Passage 2 tab at
In Passage 1, what is one way the author reveals his point of
view regarding surfing?
(A) by suggesting how much he wants to be a famous
surfer
al inlet or river. It is
of Passage 1
ngland.
B by pointing out the thrill he feels while surfing on a
wave
() by explaining that surfing was more important to him
than saving money
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(D) by describing his gratitude for the people who
introduced him to surfing
an internship, I had

so what would this mean

A friend of yours threw an extravagant party to celebrate something that doesn’t require so much spending. Is there a better way of saying, " She did all this to celebrate... "

Please use the following option to fill in ..

Success is counted sweetest
by Emily Dickinson
Success is counted sweetest
By those who ne'er succeed.
To comprehend a nectar
Requires sorest need.
Not one of all the Purple Host
who took the Flag today
Can tell the definition
So clear of Victory
As he defeated - dying -
On whose forbidden ear
The distant strains of triumph
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Select the correct answer.
What theme is expressed in Dickinson's poem?
OA. Successful people take success for granted.
OB. Failure is important to personal growth.
OC. Victory in war is not worth the cost.
D.
Success is best valued by those who experience failure.

Please help; Only answer if you have time to read I will award you brainliest

My grandfather never called me by my English name. He liked to call me Yellow Feather in Pomo language. He said a yellow feather fell on his feet as he held me for the first time in his arms.
"Oh, how I miss watching yellow birds flying in Talahalusi, the beautiful land," Grandpa would tear up every time he remembered my birth in Napa Valley.
Then, he would talk about the wooden baskets he wove as I left him at the balcony and went to school. "Your grandmother's baskets were always more beautiful," he would say. My grandfather always looked curiously at my phone and wished I would pay attention to the birds instead.
We had moved from Napa Valley years ago, and now my grandfather was staying with us. Although he had brought his basket making materials with him, they lay mostly unwoven in his room. He spent much of his time sitting on the bench in the backyard.
I pressed my nose to the kitchen window, fogging the glass with my breath as I watched him sitting straight and stiff on the bench. On an impulse, I slid open the back door. Leaving my phone by the back door, I walked out and sat beside him on the bench.
He didn't acknowledge me, although I felt the flick of his gaze on me as I stared out at the woods that sheltered the span of land behind our house. It was nothing like the rolling green valleys I remembered from Napa, and I suddenly realized he was homesick. Not only that, but I began to feel a longing for Napa that I couldn't account for, a yearning that sang through my veins. A bird sand a sweet song from a nearby tree, and my grandfather tilted his head and smiled a little.
"You can hear that, Yellow Feather, now that you don't have your phone," he said with a chuckle.
For the first time, I realized that he held the key to a world that I needed to know about.
"Grandfather, will you teach me our history?" I said.
I could tell my question had caught him off guard, but he merely nodded, squeezing my hand as we listened to the birdsong.
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How does Yellow Feather change during the story?
A.
He becomes interested in learning about birds.
B.
He becomes less interested in the past.
C.
He becomes more attached to the modern world.
D.
He becomes more appreciative of his grandfather.
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In Perseus and the Quest for Medusa's Head, Athena guides Perseus and provides him with the knowledge he needs to complete his task
which makes the best connection between this detail and life experience?

A: Arnold tends to ignore his mother's advice even when he knows she is right.
B: Sally was late for school for the third time that week; she knew that she would be in trouble with her parents.
C: The advice his mother gave him seemed pointless at the time but the day of the exam her advice helped James pass the test.
D: sam liked to do things his way; he never took advice from anyone and forged his own path.
(I think C is right I am not sure i will give branliy for right awnser