Can revision make your essay worse?

Answer:

No, unless you change your original answer.

Explanation:

Fixing spelling mistakes, punctuation, etc. will always help you.

Yes and no. Revision is another chance for you making your essay better. But it is possible to go worst on revision. The revision process, you improve your reading skills and your analytical skills. You learn to challenge your own ideas, thus deepening and strengthening your argument. Can also  learn to find the weaknesses in your writing. Most of the times, revision makes your essay better.

His unpleasant behavior at the party was abominable.

If abominate means “to hate or loathe intensely,” what does abominable mean?

not able to be hateful; loving

capable of being hated; disgusting

previously hateful; reformed

neither loved nor hated; neutral

Which sentence uses parallel structure correctly?

Of all my relatives, Jamahl is the most caring and generous and who I find is the most fun to be with.

For our annual Fourth of July picnic, Mom grilled hamburgers, hot dogs, and she also served grilled chicken.


Deciding on a movie, choosing a time, and then to buy the tickets all take a lot of negotiating for our family.

He reminded me that I had asked for the responsibility, I had bragged about always keeping my promises, and the project had to be finished by Monday.

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Think of a culture you have always wanted to know more about. Write a brief summary of what you do know about the culture and what you find interesting. (The culture could exist now or in the past.)

PART A: Which statement best identifies the
central idea of the text?

Match each line from King's speech to the type of rhetorical technique it best shows.
"there are insufficient funds in the
allusion
great vaults of opportunity"
"go back to Mississippi, go back to
Alabama, go back to South Carolina"
repetition
"let freedom ring from every hill and
molehill of Mississippi"
metaphor
"with its vicious racists"
connotation

Which detail from "Undercover Farmer” best shows that the narrator’s activism on behalf of farm animals changed practices in the community?

What is the best way to describe Gawain character

Are you a competitive person?​

At Gladys' Bakery in Weimar, Texas, you can purchase the worlds largest fruit cake. It weighs 150 pounds and it is in the shape of the state of Texas. What is it's price?

The Beatles

When people hear the name "The Beatles" most people think of co-lead singer, John Lennon. However, the role of Paul McCartney is often overlooked.
John Lennon and Paul McCartney were in other bands together before the forming of the Beatles. In 1962, along with Ringo Starr and George Harrison, they formed the rock group known as "The Beatles." The group featured a modern rock that was new and popular during the period with John and Paul composing and doing the leads on most of the songs. They were backed by George on lead guitar and Ringo on drums. George and Ringo also assisted on backing vocals.
When they first began playing, the main influence inside the band was John Lennon, who had an ability to compose songs at a moment's notice with an inspiration that others missed. He pushed the members of the band during their touring years and was able to achieve the best possible results from the group. However, McCartney was also a strong force in the group since Lennon many times asked for McCartney's advice about ideas for songs. McCartney wrote many of the group's biggest hit songs, and often, he didn't even ask for song writing credit.
After the breakup, McCartney launched a successful solo career. He has released many recordings both in the United States and abroad. One accomplishment was his first classical piece, Liverpool Oratorio, which is no small feat considering that McCartney never learned to read music.

Which text would most likely follow the same text structure as the passage?
A.
a report listing the best instruments for new musicians
B.
an article explaining the effects of music on babies
C.
an encyclopedia entry detailing the history of music
D.
a piece explaining how pianos and harpsichords are alike

Which selection best provides evidence to support the central idea that Shakespeare's comedies are written to create a happy and optimistic mood? Shakespeare wrote many types of plays, but two of the most important are comedies and tragedies. The comedies, which include A Midsummer Nightz Dream" and "As You Like It" have a lighthearted and magical feel. They usually take place in a natunalsetung such as a forest, feature a plan that involves disquisas and mistaken identity and tell a love story that ends with a wedding Shakespeare's tragedies, on the other hand, are usually somber and awe-inspiring These playı, which include "Romeo and Juliet" and Hamler feature characten caught an struggles they cant escape. usually partially caused by their own actions. Unlike the comedies, which all have happy ending. Shakespeare's tragedien end in the deaths of most, if not all, of the main characters. It is a testament to Shakespeare's skill that even these unhappy playa have proved lascinating to audiences throughout the centuries O A. Unlike the comedies, which all have happy endings. Shakespeare's tragedies end in the deaths of most, il net all of the main characters O B. Shakespeare's tragedien, on the other hand, are usually somber and awe-inspiring C. The comedies, which include "A Midsummer Night's Dream' and "As You Like It, have a lighthearted and magical feel D. They usually take place in a natural setting such as a forest, foature a plot that involvedogues and mistaken identity, and tell a love story that ends with a wedding.​

When you make an inference, you:
A. debate whether there is merit to what the author writes.
B. ask critical questions about the text.
C. figure out what a new vocabulary word means and why the author
chose it.
D. find meaning in the text beyond the words that are written.

Ichabod Crane was said to have "sojourned," or, as he put it, "tarried" in Sleepy Hollow.
Which is the meaning of these words?

On a coordinate plane, a graph decreases between (2.5, 2) and (4.5, 0.25). How does this graph change between (2.5, 2) and (4.5, 0.25)?
A. Increase
B. Decrease
C. No Change

According to the lesson, which of the
following is a type of promotion?
Regular promotion
Active promotion
Modified promotion
Reserve promotion

Read the excerpt from act ll scene vi of Romeo and Juliet Which is an example of a paradox within the excerpt

The bridge (build) last year.(correct form of tense?
​

How are Canadians able to produce enough food for their own
use and still have food to sell to other countries when only 5
percent of the land is arable?
Canadians buy most of their food from other countries.
Canada is a very large country, so 5 percent arable land is quite a lot
of land.
Canadians do not eat as much food as other people.
Canada has lots of technology that they use to grow more crops on a
small amount of land.

How do fazlullahs men impact malala’s decisions

Which statement best summarizes the central idea of
this passage?
O In America, great things can be achieved if one
O Political struggles are not the only tthings that create
O There are many different aspects to a Latino
O ldentity comes from many aspects, including
plans in advance and works hard,
a Latino or Latina identity,
identity, including the importance of farnily.
political struggles that inspire how one lives life,

How can a reader trace how an author develops a central idea throughout a text? Check all that apply.
Uby looking for the denotative and the connotative meanings of the author's words
O by determining the central idea of each paragraph
D by identifying the most important details used to support the central idea of each paragraph
Oby analyzing how the author uses context to convey the central idea in each paragraph
U by summarizing the central idea and key details of each paragraph in a single sentence
U by finding the common element among the central ideas throughout the text

Should the US build a physical barrier, such as a wall, along the US-Mexico border?

How does Lady Macbeth change over the course of the story? When you write about change,
you must include what a person is like at both points. That means you must say what a person is
like and then what changes the person undergoes.

Alice wrote an argument against replacing textbooks with tablets in her school. Here is one of her reasons and one piece of evidence to support it:

Reason: Many students have insufficient Internet access in their homes.

Evidence: About one-third of all Americans do not have broadband Internet at home.

Which of the following creates the strongest cohesion between Alice’s reason and the evidence?
A. Many students have insufficient Internet access in their homes. In fact, about one-third of all Americans do not have broadband Internet at home.
B. Many students have insufficient Internet access in their homes, but about one-third of all Americans do not have broadband Internet at home.
C. Many students have insufficient Internet access in their homes; about one-third of all Americans do not have broadband Internet at home.
D. Many students have insufficient Internet access in their homes; for example, about one-third of all Americans do not have broadband Internet at home.

I joined the soccer team.
Joe tried out for the school play.
and F joining word
Combine the sentences into one sentence.

write 10 words, related to Winter and encircle the vowels​

1. How does the phrase "they use everything of the pig except the
squeal" (Paragraph 1) contribute to the central ideas of the text?
1
alf
O A The phrase refers to the meatpacking industry's use of the
entire animal, even non-meat parts, thus contributing to the
central idea of American ingenuity.
OB The phrase refers to the meatpacking industry's use of animals,
even spoiled meat and non-meat parts, thus contributing to the
central idea of the industry's corrupt and unsanitary nature.
OC The phrase refers to the meatpacking industry's terrible
treatment of its livestock, thus contributing to the central idea
of the industry's corrupt and cruel animal-raising practices.
OD The phrase refers to the meatpacking industry's mistreatment
of its employees, taking advantage of them and leaving only
their voice, thus contributing to the central idea of the
employees exposing the horrors of the industry.

Read the exert:
Each night, thousands of residents in New York City are cleaning and putting out fresh towels. They are preparing to rent their apartments to strangers. Residents are using Web sites such as Airbnb.com. There, they can list apartments or rooms by the night. People who rent out their homes say it helps them. It is often the only way they can afford to pay their rent. Rents are about $3,000 a month, but can be $6,000 in some areas. New York is the nation's most expensive city. Mishelle Farer has a two-bedroom apartment. She rents the second bedroom. She says she earns about half her rent this way.

the expenses are_______.
A.dismissed
B.shared
C.sorted
D.charged

Read the stanza from "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night."

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Which interpretation best explains the use of the word wave as a pun?

sweeping movement of large numbers of people

influx of migrating people


sudden increase in population

slight curling to the texture of the hair

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