02.10 Kick It Up a Notch Assignment

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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.

View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.

Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.


Copy this paragraph into a new document.


Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.


Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.


Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.


Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.


In one document, submit:

the original paragraph


the revised paragraph


the reflection on the changes you have made


Save your work to your computer or drive.

Submit your work in 02.10 Kick It Up a Notch.







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The jellyfish are overpopulating our oceans. Some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily! That is how swarms turn into blooms. When jellyfish numbers are out of control, that’s when they are called blooms. According to the Columbia University website,” Jellyfish blooms disrupt the fishing industry by tearing nets and harming fish. Smaller jellyfish or jellyfish tentacles can enter aquaculture pens and suffocate the fish surrounding the jellyfish. Jellyfish sting swimmers, discouraging tourism. They clog cooling water intakes at power plants, causing power reductions or shutdowns.” These are some bad problems that need solutions.

9th,10th graders, and etc

What is on the placement test?(hspt)

In chapter 11 from summer of the mariposas. Odilia and her sisters encounter a donkey. How does Odilia respond to meeting the donkey? what aspect of her character does this reveal?

What does the Terracotta Army reveal about the history and culture of the Qin dynasty?

What motivates the speaker in “Sonnet” and Ida B. Wells to act heroically?

Match the definition to the term.

1. dependent clause
2. conjunction
3. independent clause

a group of words that has both a subject and a predicate but cannot stand alone as a sentence

the part of speech that connects words, phrases, clauses, or sentences

a group of words made up of a subject and a predicate

Select all that apply.

Adjectives: _____.

clarify
describe
modify
answer questions

Can someone PLEASE help me write this essay for the "Sweet Grown Alabama" ALFA Essay Contest????? I will give maximum points and brainliest if someone can help me write this paper...

Who you callin' Pinhead?

What is Migration?
D. The Lifecycle of a Butterfly
E. Another name for Butterfly Larvae
F. The Seasonal Movement from one region to Another

*I want Nice people that can Answer this question, not People that are rude*

Question 1 of 10
A(n) transition shows the steps in a process. Some examples of this
type of transition are "above all," "first," "second," "furthermore," and "next."
A. order-of-importance
B. summary
C. comparison
D. cause-and-effect

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i needed it

HELP ME WORTH 15 POINTS
Select all the correct answers.
In what two ways can the climax of a story affect the main character?
The events of the climax reveal a hidden aspect of the character.
The events of the climax help the character come to a realization.
The events of the climax result in the death of the character.
The events of the climax cause the character to start a journey.
The events of the climax prepare the character for a conflict.

Complete the following sentence.
Canada is the _______ largest country in the world.

identify the adverb in the sentence.

The twins go everywhere together.

A. go
B. twins
C. everywhere
D. together


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Directions: Fill in the missing word with the vocabulary word that makes sense. Be sure to use the correct form of the word.

recite rigid torment adjusted mock devoted


1. Melissa slowly ________________________ to her new school.

2. I don’t like it when people ____________________ how I speak. It
makes me feel bad.

3. Sometimes when I have to speak in front of a large group of people, my legs become_______________________ and I feel like I will never be able to bend them again.

4. I like to __________________________ poems by Maya Angelou.

5. Jonathan is ____________________________ to his new baby sister.

6. Bullies think it’s fun to __________________________ other people, but I think it’s disgusting.

PLZ HELP!!!!!
WILL GIVE BRAINLY TO THE PERSON WHO HELP ME!!! HELP ME PLZ

can some write me a poem and use figurtive language any topic from blow blow thur the winter wind

plsss 30 points

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain))
What happens when Tom lies down in the grass pretending to be dead?
His cousin, Mary, finds him and scolds him.
He catches a cold and must go home to Aunt Polly.
He gets drenched with water from a window.
A girl notices him and gives him a flower.

How does the quote “Even Dally has a breaking point” from the outsiders relate to teens?

a labrador retriever has brown fur (Bb) and mates with a yellow lab (bb). What percent will their puppies be yellow? Use the punnetts square to help you.
100%
75%
50%
25%
0%

I need help with this is it Its or it's

Monarch Butterflies are sometimes called “The king of the Butterflies”.
They are special butterflies. Monarchs make mass migration or seasonal movement each fall and spring. In the fall, Monarchs fly nearly 3,000 miles to México or California. They migrate to the south so they can be warm. Monarchs will spend six to eight months in the warmer climate. In the Spring, the Monarchs fly back to their northern Habitat. They fly back to the North so they can lay their eggs. They lay their eggs on milkweed plants. Milk weed plants only grow in the North. After the Eggs hatch, The Larvae eat the milkweed plant on which is placed. The milkweed plant is the only thing the Larvae can eat! The Monarch migration is very special.

Based on this passage, you can conclude that.
D. Monarch Butterflies are not Impressive.
E. MonarchButterflies will not survive if the milkweed plants went away.
F. Other types of Butterflies also migrate.

What type of figurative language is this???


“The ancient tower of a church had a gruff old bell that was always peeping slyly down at Scrooge out of a Gothic window in the wall.”

Answer the following question with the best answer possible. Who is the protagonist? A. Alymer
B.Georgiana
C.Aminadab
D.none of the above

Read the excerpt from "Healthy Eating."

Unless you're trying to lose weight, nutritionists like to avoid diets. "We were just laughing about that, like we could sell fairy dust and that's pretty much what a lot of these fad diets are about," said Natalie Castro-Romero, the corporate dietician at Baptist who oversees the company's 15,000 employees. "One very common thing that happens is people feel overwhelmed and they need a starter to get something going, like a detox, but there’s no truth behind that." For some people, small changes can lead to big results.

Which statement best describes the author's argument in this part of the article?

A- Diet plans are helpful only for people who want to make a change.

B- People should not feel pressured to start living a healthier lifestyle.

C- People do not need to take drastic measures to start eating healthier.

D- Diet plans cause much more harm than people think they do.

Cats can bring a lot of joy to your life. They also require a few items to live comfortably in your home. They are easy to care for and will be there to cuddle you in return. The cost of owning a cat is manageable but needs consideration. As long as you follow these guidelines, you will be a wonderful owner to your new cat or kitten. Every cat is unique. Over time, you will learn how to provide for its individual needs and get to know its personality.
Select the sentence that correctly states how the headings support the article.
Question 2 options:

They give the reader an idea of the topic in each section.

They help explain the text in enough detail for the reader.

They give the reader an idea of other features in the section.

They help explain the other text features in enough detail.

I give you a brainliest if you answer my question look at the picture

Which sentence contains a simile?


The sheriff was a hearty fellow.


Amelia likes to jog before breakfast.


Pynchon’s Pond was as smooth as glass.


The stream gurgled over the rocks.

8. What is a central idea of this passage?
A Oliver often has to take care of himself.
B Oliver wants to tell his parents about his kite failure.
C Oliver is fond of his great-uncle, the kite smith.
D Oliver is very skilled at making and flying kites.

compare and contrast the tone of "The Nose" and "A Very old Man with Enormous wings.